One stormy day there was a group of explorers looking for a new home. One day they found a big city in the middle of the desert and found footprints. The footprints had to lead somewhere…After they went to the city to find out who the footprints belong to as they were going to the big city it was only everyone was hiding from something and the explorers looked and looked but they found nothing later on the kept looking and they found a big whale in a cave. The whale was hurt so the people secured it. The explorers helped the whale and the whale was freed in the water and the explorers were heroes.
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ReplyDeleteKia Fatima great job on you blog post about you writing. I really like this sentence The Explorers helped the whale and the whale was freed in the water and the explorers were hero. I thing you can one and not two and. Do you like to writhing. Blog you later Oshani.
Kia Ora Oshani, Thanks for your comment. I do like to writing because it contributes to my learning and understanding. You should try writing because it's fun and you will like it so much. Have you written a story before? Blog you later. Fatima
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ReplyDeleteZhe shi zenme hui shi Fatima my name is Caleb and i'm from room 25.
ReplyDeletei really like that in the end they helped the whale and cared for it. it was a really insetting story if i were given that image i would not have came up with such a idea. the only thing that was a bit wrong was when you just suddenly said the whale was hurt instead you could of said there was a whale in the cave it was hurt and did you know that it is based in Dubai. what were you thinking when you made this story?
Blog You Later,
Caleb