It was one dark day. The amazing and humongous robot stood above the crowd on a very cloudy day as the crowd of people were watching with amazement because they were excited about the robot. There were all kinds of people at the stadium to see the robot. Even though the robot was big he looked like he was going to help the world. His hands and feet were amazingly bigger than any other robot there was in the world and his body was like a giant's body and bigger than they expected it to be. As soon as the crowd saw the robot they started talking and the others were taking lots of pictures.
Kia ora Fatima, My name is Jiraiya from room 24. I like your writing because it is very creative.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Cole and I’m from Room 25 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about The visitor. I remember when I did something like this but it was about a different story. Have you ever tried Using different fonts and colours for your writing?
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Cole